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Sunday, September 13, 2009

Final Announcement

Hi all,
It has certainly be an eventful week for this blog and me. Thank you to all who has contributed and the five "early-birds" are:
1)Lee Jia Hern
2)Gu Shi Yu
3)Bryan Tay
4)Zhao Jiayi
5)Tan Rhe-Anne
*They are listed according to the sequence of submission of works.
They will be given simple prizes tomorrow, which is the first day of school, I am not confident if they will be satisfied or disappointed. But one thing for sure, the prizes that are coming your way are much better.
I sure hope that all of you have enjoyed this blog tremendously, both as an entertaintment (e.g laughing at your friends' foolishness or what-so-ever etc) and as an inspiration (e.g I should start using this name, blah... etc).
However, because of the end of year exams, this blog will be temporarily "resting" since everyone is going to be studying. But all of you are forever welcomed to read the stories, send in your "masterpieces" and of course, follow this blog!
Last but not least, the polls for the 2 competition will be put up after the exams and then all of you can vote for the winners!
I look forward updating this blog soon! 
Buh-bye! :)
   

*Final Part * Mystery Story by Tan Rhe-Anne

Dear all,
This is the final part of Rhe-Anne's mystery story. Please enjoy it!
~Final Part~
Chapter 4
Toledo prepared for his task. He prepared the quill, obtained some torches to provide light in the passageway and studied the maps of the palace carefully. He was concerned about passing the royal study as the king would work late there each night.
Toledo decided on soft-soled shoes so he could move more quietly. He looked ruefully at his Milanese loafers, they would be ruined by the evening’s outing. “I will have to get a new pair when I next visit the Duke of Milan” he thought.
When the night watchman called out the twelfth hour, Toledo stepped out of his room and headed for the nearest entrance to the secret passages. It was the tiny alcove just past the suit of armour on the landing outside his room. He hoped it would not creak too much when he open the wall. It did. He clenched his teeth as the hinges creaked. Fortunately, the guards were well past on their patrols, That was why Toledo had chosen to do the deed at midnight-the guards would all be patrolling the castle’s servant quarters.
After gaining entry, Toledo lighted a torch he had brought with him and moved forward gingerly. “Thaddeus didn’t do a very good job the last time with the fungus. I can still smell some of it.” he thought to himself. What seemed like hours passed. He made several wrong turns and had to back track. “I’ll have to remember the casino in the servant’s quarters, that game of poker looked really interesting”.
Toledo finally reached the queen’s chambers. The passageway opened into the ensuite toilet. This was fortunate as it meant no one would be able to see him enter the room. Toledo stepped onto the very plush carpet and peeped into the room. His stepmother the queen was asleep on the large four-poster bed. “The dreadful women snores in her sleep”, he thought to himself. Tiptoeing over to her desk, he replaced the quill with the poisoned one from his pocket.
Toledo crept back to the secret passageway. He looked at the queen one last time and thought to himself, “Quite easily done. Sarah is now avenged”
Chapter 5
Toledo returns to his quarters exhausted from the night’s outing. He changes out of his dank clothing and collapses on the bed. At daybreak, he is awaken by a huge commotion in the palace. “They must have found her body” he thought. “I must remember to look shocked and grieved.”
A loud knock on his door and the royal chamberlain demands entry. He looks gravely at Toledo and says “Your father the king is dead. Your mother will be proclaimed regent until your coming of age.” Toledo reeled in shock. “How was this possible? How could my father have died! I must speak with Thaddeus!”
Lunging past the shocked royal chamberlain, Toledo races to the Royal Chemist. He passes a palace in an uproar. There are guards everywhere and frightened servants questioned by the dreaded secret police.
Toledo takes the steps to Thaddeus laboratory in a few quick bounds, such was his haste. Without waiting for permission to enter, Toledo crashes into the room. “Thaddeus, what has happened?”
”The king is dead, he was poisoned last night” Thaddeus replied simply.
Toledo shouted, “It’s not possible, I poisoned the quill myself ...”
“Seize him!” the queen shouted from behind Toledo, popping out from behind some bookcases. “There is your murderer, from his own mouth his words condemn him. How could you murder the king, my husband and your own father!” The secret police rush past Thaddeus and the queen to seize Toledo.
“Take him to the dungeon for my personal interrogation” the queen orders.
Chapter 6
A search of Toledo’s room finds the vial of poison, loafers and dank clothes. They are presented before the Privy Council, the king’s closest advisers and councillors. “Prince Toledo is clearly guilty of regicide. He is not fit to rule the kingdom,” they announced
With this decision, power is transferred to the queen and she is proclaimed the new ruler of the kingdom. She goes quickly to the dungeon to visit Toledo. She finds him sitting there gloomily resigned to his fate. “Well, my stepson. Here you are and you thought you could try to kill me. I will be merciful and make sure your death is a quick one.”
“I don’t understand. I poisoned your quill myself, but yet my father died instead.” The queen cackles coldly as she considers her reply. “Thaddeus, come forward. Why don’t you explain to this simpleton what really happened!”
Thaddeus steps forward and laughs at Toledo. “You ignorant child, I murdered Sarah and used your desire for vengeance to hatch a plot to kill your father. You were so blind and assumed that the secret police acted on the orders of the queen. She and I are lovers. I have been promised me great power and authority when she comes to power. You stupid rival of mine, it is the gallows for you soon.” The echoes of a smile danced across Thaddeus’s face.
“I took to her my idea to have you use the secret passages and to poison the quill. I too used the passageways that night. I poisoned a quill in the royal study and informed the queen not to use hers. Besides, how else do you think I knew the walls were thin near the royal study!” Thaddeus said, with a contemptuous look on his face.
“Enough talking, prepare to meet your maker. I will rule your kingdom well with Thaddeus behind me,” the queen gloats. Thaddeus nods and grins. Toledo sobs as he is lead to the gallows.
“I have led a wasted life,” he cried in anguish.
~End of Story~

*Part 1* Mystery Story by Tan Rhe-Anne

Dear all,


This is the final part of Rhe-Anne's mystery story. Please enjoy it!

And on the request of Rhe-Anne, if you are Glen, please stop bothering her about the Tale.

~Part 1~


Chapter 1

It was nearly midnight, and everyone in the castle was asleep. All except Prince Toledo. He was sneaking out of the castle to meet Sarah, the love of his life. Sarah was a servant girl at the palace, and if Toledo’s mother the queen ever found out, she would have her killed.
The Prince settled down to wait at their usual meeting place, beside a tall oak tree. It was hardly safe for him to go to Sarah’s house. He knew too well what sort of welcome awaited him, for the villagers resented the royal family. Who could blame them? The royalty had introduced taxes, made the villagers give more than half of their meagre crop and even enslaved some to work for them in the castle.
Out of the stillness of the night, he heard the clippety- clop of horses. He looked; it was the kingdom’s dreaded secret police, easily identified by their long, scarlet capes. Ducking behind some bushes, he watched as an agent heaved a dead body onto a horse drawn cart. Toledo glanced at the corpse and his heart broke. The wavy, golden locks and beautiful face was Sarah’s. He could not understand what could have caused this to happen.
The thought of losing Sarah had never occurred to him and now she was gone. A fiery rage began to build inside of him. There and then, the prince promised himself that he would avenge her death.
Chapter 2
The following day was the King’s birthday banquet, a lavish affair. Harried servants scurried about the castle decorating, making arrangements and generally ensuring that the banquet would run smoothly. Ignoring the hustle and bustle, the prince headed for the royal chemist and his private tutor Thaddeus. Ascending the staircase leading to his lab, he pondered how to seek Thaddeus’ help in finding Sarah’s murderer. There was hardly a need for him to meet Thaddeus secretly, as nobody went into his laboratory if they could help it. Rumour had it that Thaddeus even kept a dragon in there, although Toledo knew that was not true.
His thoughts were interrupted by his father’s booming voice. “Toledo, why aren’t you in your finery, my lad! Change and and greet my guests in the great hall!”
Toledo would have to speak to Thaddeus later. Heading for his room, he opened his closet and and put on the prince’s royal garments of state, taking extra time to make sure he did all the clasps properly, unlike previously, when the cloak had dropped off in the middle of a banquet. He remembered Sarah laughing at how silly they looked, when she had seen him in them at a ceremony. I will never hear her lilting voice again, he anguished.
Later in the great hall, he saw Queen Rosetta chatting with the Duke of Aquitaine. Prince Toledo never liked his stepmother. She was involved in all manner of court politicking. The secret police answered to her and her alone. That was because she rewarded them handsomely if they carried out her orders well, and beheaded them if they dared disobey. She was also reputed to have ordered the deaths of those she considered a threat to the royal line. Her latest intrigue was for Toledo to marry the daughter of the duke of Aquitaine’s daughter in order to cement the duke’s loyalty to the throne. This would also give the kingdom access to the gold mines of the Sky Mountains.
Toledo greeted the guests and dismissed them from his presence with a curt nod. His mind seethed with thoughts of revenge. The queen must have ordered Sarah’s death. There was no other reason for her murder. He felt a hand grip his arm. Looking up he saw Thaddeus Levittown, the royal chemist staring at him. “I understand you were seeking me, my Prince?”
Toledo blinked in surprise. How had Thaddeus known? He nodded and motioned to a quiet area of the hall, away from the stream of aristocrats waltzing in. He explained his suspicions then came to the crux of the matter. “You have been my tutor since I was a baby and I have trusted you in all things. Sarah is dead and I know the Queen had a hand in the matter. I seek to avenge Sarah. It has not escaped me that you too have an axe to grind against the Queen. Something to do with your fall from grace three harvests ago and the appointment of your rival to the post of Royal Advisor. I also happen to know that you have been working on some, ah, concoctions.”
A trouble look crossed Thaddeus face. “Vengeance never solved anything my lord, but I will not deny you in this”. Reaching into the folds of his robe, he pulled out a small vial. “Be careful not to touch it, only a few drops will do the deed.”
Feigning illness, Toledo excused himself from the banquet and returned to his quarters. He began planning how he could obtain his revenge. Taking the vial out of his pocket, Toledo studied it. It contained a pale, purplish liquid that bubbled when you shook it. The vial itself was special, the kind Thaddeus used for his most dangerous potions that he made for the secret police. It was made of sapphire and the stopper of ruby.
Chapter 3
Toledo wanted to avenge Sarah, but there was also another reason. The queen had been very unpopular with the peasants. Prince Toledo knew that if she was eliminated, perhaps he could win back their favour and support for the throne. Unfortunately, the queen’s chambers were like an impregnable fortress, as she was incredibly paranoid about people sneaking into her rooms at night. He would have to wait patiently for an opportune time. He also knew that he would need help. Toledo decided to visit with his tutor Thaddeus again.
“I need to get into the queen’s private chambers. At a time when I can be certain her ladies in waiting are not attending to her”. Thaddeus nodded sagely. “When I first came to the palace as an apprentice, I was called on to help with a dreadful odour. I eventually learnt that the palace was riddled with secret passages, many forgotten. These had in time deteriorated and allowed fungi to grow causing the smell. The royal architect and I travelled all through the palace to kill the fungi. I secretly kept a copy of the blueprints that maps all the passages, just in case I should ever need them again.”
Taking the blueprints from their hiding place behind a portrait in his room, Thaddeus showed the prince how he could gain access to the queen’s chambers without being detected. “Mind the royal study. The walls are thin there and you could be heard from within the room when using the passageway.” Thaddeus then went to his drawer and placed a quill in the prince’s hand. “Apply the poison to the quill. Replace the one the queen uses with this. She will touch it and die in seconds.”
Prince Toledo was very pleased with the outcome of his visit to Thaddeus. “I shall do the deed myself this very night!”
Toledo blinked in surprise. How had Thaddeus known? He nodded and motioned to a quiet area of the hall, away from the stream of aristocrats waltzing in. He explained his suspicions then came to the crux of the matter. “You have been my tutor since I was a baby and I have trusted you in all things. Sarah is dead and I know the Queen had a hand in the matter. I seek to avenge Sarah. It has not escaped me that you too have an axe to grind against the Queen. Something to do with your fall from grace three harvests ago and the appointment of your rival to the post of Royal Advisor. I also happen to know that you have been working on some, ah, concoctions.”
A trouble look crossed Thaddeus face. “Vengeance never solved anything my lord, but I will not deny you in this”. Reaching into the folds of his robe, he pulled out a small vial. “Be careful not to touch it, only a few drops will do the deed.”
Feigning illness, Toledo excused himself from the banquet and returned to his quarters. He began planning how he could obtain his revenge. Taking the vial out of his pocket, Toledo studied it. It contained a pale, purplish liquid that bubbled when you shook it. The vial itself was special, the kind Thaddeus used for his most dangerous potions that he made for the secret police. It was made of sapphire and the stopper of ruby.
Chapter 3
Toledo wanted to avenge Sarah, but there was also another reason. The queen had been very unpopular with the peasants. Prince Toledo knew that if she was eliminated, perhaps he could win back their favour and support for the throne. Unfortunately, the queen’s chambers were like an impregnable fortress, as she was incredibly paranoid about people sneaking into her rooms at night. He would have to wait patiently for an opportune time. He also knew that he would need help. Toledo decided to visit with his tutor Thaddeus again.
“I need to get into the queen’s private chambers. At a time when I can be certain her ladies in waiting are not attending to her”. Thaddeus nodded sagely. “When I first came to the palace as an apprentice, I was called on to help with a dreadful odour. I eventually learnt that the palace was riddled with secret passages, many forgotten. These had in time deteriorated and allowed fungi to grow causing the smell. The royal architect and I travelled all through the palace to kill the fungi. I secretly kept a copy of the blueprints that maps all the passages, just in case I should ever need them again.”
Taking the blueprints from their hiding place behind a portrait in his room, Thaddeus showed the prince how he could gain access to the queen’s chambers without being detected. “Mind the royal study. The walls are thin there and you could be heard from within the room when using the passageway.” Thaddeus then went to his drawer and placed a quill in the prince’s hand. “Apply the poison to the quill. Replace the one the queen uses with this. She will touch it and die in seconds.”
Prince Toledo was very pleased with the outcome of his visit to Thaddeus. “I shall do the deed myself this very night!”
~End of Part 1~


My Mystery Story *Final Part*

Dear All, please enjoy the final part of my mystery story, hope all of you like it!




~Final Part of Mystery Story~
Title- Revenge Over Relations
Suddenly, Theodore knew it. He remembered where he had seen the ring. Theodore just needed to clarify. He closed the computer and had a drive to the city. An hour later, Theodore was back.
Theodore knocked on Ron’s bedroom’s door. The door opened, Ron was surprised. “How can I help you, Mr Theodore?” “Would you mind having coffee with me?” Ron followed Theodore out of the room.
Carrying two bottles with him, Theodore entered the dining room. Ron was restlessly pacing about. Startled, Ron stared at the bottles and asked, “Aren’t they the bottle found in Lyons hands?” “Don’t worry, Mr Crave. It’s coffee inside,” Theodore smiled sarcastically and replied. Ron flinched while taking a bottle from the glass table and studied it carefully. “Help yourself,” Theodore declared warmly and took a gulp from it. Ron cautiously opened the cap and took a sip. “It’s time,” Theodore thought. Tilting his hand purposely, he let go of the bottle. The delicate glass broke the moment it hit the hard marble floor, and brown content seeped out. Ron quickly put down his bottle and rushed to find a broom and a dustpan. A few moments later, he returned and start sweeping up the fragments while Theodore wiped the floor with tissue. Satisfied, Theodore stood up, thanking Ron and at the same time asking him to call every member of the estate to the living room.
Theodore went to the living room ten minutes later. As he expected, everyone was there. “Have you solve the case?” Mrs Casper asked. Theodore shook his head and sat down in an armchair, facing everyone. “I just need to get the age of everyone here,” Theodore said directly. Christina raised an eyebrow. “No reason,” Theodore said simply.
“Fine, I am twenty-four, 29 July 1984,” Christina said.
Ron replied, “Twenty- seven, 6 February 1981.”
“14 September 1956, fifty- two,” Mrs Casper answered.
So, one by one the people told the detective their age and date of birth. Theodore took notes, he knew it, he had solved the case.
“I have an announcement to make,” Theodore cleared his throat and said loudly. Everyone glanced up. “Would anyone like to confess?” Theodore asked. Silence. “Well, I need some help,” Theodore smiled, looking at everyone. “Can I invite Mr Ron Crave here? Or rather, should I say- Orlando Casper?” Everyone’s jaw dropped. “Here,” Ron stood up, his pistol drawn. He looked around and his gaze fell on Theodore. “How did you know?”
“The ring that you wore on your hand. I am very sure that it is the exact same ring as shown in a photo album of your mother, Milan Anne Raffles. By purposely dropping the coffee bottle in our appointment fifteen minutes ago, you showed me the ring clearly with the initials engraved on it. You seemed uncomfortable drinking from the bottle too. You obviously were worried that there might be poison inside, thus you were very cautious. You wanted revenge, as Mr Casper abandoned your mother and caused her death, which I came to know from an article online.
Unfortunately, after you kill Mr Casper, in the afternoon, the valet saw the ring. He had worked in this household for more than thirty years; thus, he probably recognized it and the initials engraved on it. You were afraid that he would tell, thus, you killed him. Am I correct?”
Ron cut in. “ I was clearly careless about the ring. Sigh, It was the only thing left that reminded me of my mother. I did not dare to wear the ring when Mr Casper was alive, I was sure that he would have recognized it. After avenging my mother’s death by killing him, I knew that my mum would be proud of me, therefore I wore the ring. I did not know that Lyons had worked in the household for more than thirty years until it was too late. I had to kill him.
Let me have the honour of telling you my method of killing Lyons. I bought a fast- working poison, the kind that once you taste it, you would die. I do not understand how the valet could have written that message. Perhaps you have the answer?”
“I do. You used tobacco to poison Mr Casper, but you forgot one point. After tasting the poison, the victim would become very hot, very stimulated, pass out very quickly and die, in as little as one minute. A person with a strong constitution might actually take ten or fifteen minutes to be truly dead. A frail old woman or child would take only moments.
I was surprised when I found out that it was coffee inside the bottle. I assume that there was poison contained. I then went to a pharmacy nearby, where I have a friend, an expert in poisons. He told me that when tobacco leaves are soaked in the sun for several days, the concoction is allowed to evaporate, leaving a thick black tar. The tar tastes very strong, but it only takes a small amount, preferably in coffee to cover up the taste. You thought he would die quickly, but you were wrong. The valet was a person with strong constitution. During those fifteen minutes, he wrote that word in daze. He probably could not think clearly and the word ‘mistress’ was the only word that reminds him of you,” Theodore answered.
“I am impressed, Dylan Theodore. Unfortunately, since you all know so much, I’m afraid I shall have to arrange your deaths in the Casper mansion which will catch fire… accidentally.” Ron replied smugly.
Dylan Theodore stepped up to Ron. “I don’t think so. Thank you for such a nice confession. Now gentleman, please drop your gun and raise your hands.”
Ron let out a harsh laugh. “Why should I? All of you are so vulnerable. I am the only one who has a pistol. You are all alone and as the alarms on the gates and fence have not been set off, it is quite obvious that you have no backup.”
“Not quite,” smiled the detective. “Alarms can be deactivated.”
Dylan Theodore was still smiling when the door burst open and a heavily armed police team fanned out around the room.

~End of My Story~





*Final Part* Mystery Story by Zhao Jia Yi

Dear all,

This is part 3, as well as the final part, of Jia Yi's mystery story. Please enjoy it!

~Final Part ~
 
Title: Combination...
Detective Jones said, “If you really have nothing to hide, then surely you won’t mind me searching your room.”
The butler replied nervously. “Sure…I have nothing to hide at all. Go… ahead.”
John led Detective Jones to the butler’s room. The gardener followed with the butler behind. Detective Jones opened the door to the butler’s room and stepped inside, along with John, the gardener and the butler. His sharp eyes took in every detail of the simply furnished room. A table and two chairs were located near the door while the bed was situated near the cupboard. Something did not fit into the puzzle, however, he could not place his finger on it.
He snapped his finger. He had just realized what was missing. Pointing a finger at the bed, he inquired, “Where is the blanket?”
The butler responded sullenly, “Find out yourself.”
The gardener volunteered, “In the laundry room, sir. Hanging on the line, a black and white checked blanket. Shall I go and get it?”
Detective Jones replied, “Please do.”
The gardener strode out of the room and returned moments later, with a blanket in his hands.
Detective Jones took it and handed it to John, “Feel it. Does it feel lumpy at certain places?”
John took it and gave a start. “By golly, it does. Why?”
Detective Jones produced a large pair of scissors from his pocket and snipped open the seams of the blanket. The blanket fell apart. To the amazement of the onlookers, jewels of every size, shape and colour rained down onto the carpeted floor.
John ran forward, scooping up a handful of jewels, he cried happily, “My jewels! My precious jewels!”
Detective Jones glanced at the butler who had turned a ghastly pale. The butler, seeing that he had no way out, lowered his head in defeat. The gardener stood by, a jubilant smile on his face. Detective Jones studied the jewels, something was not right.
He turned around and said to John, “They are not real, they are duplicates. See, real jewels, when held under the light, glow but these don’t.” John was stunned and threw the jewel onto the floor.
He looked at the gardener and fitted in the missing piece of the puzzle. He announced, “But I know where they are.”
He asked the gardener, “When was the last time you went into the laundry room, excluding just now when I asked you to?”
The gardener was confused by this question. “Um… One week ago.”
Detective Jones questioned the butler, “When did you put the blanket into the laundry room?”
The sulky answer came. “Two days ago.”
Detective Jones was satisfied. “I thought so.”
He said to the gardener, “You were following the butler on the day he stole the jewels. After you saw him put the blanket into the laundry room, you went in and cut open the blanket. You hid the jewels and wiped off your fingerprints.”
The gardener protested, “Why! I never did such a thing. It was the butler.”
Detective Jones shook his head and ignored the protests. “I was puzzled when I saw two threads on the blanket. Also, how did you know where the blanket was?”
The gardener stuttered, “The butler told me.”
“No, I didn’t!” A shout of rage left the butler’s lips.
Detective Jones said, “You should both be ashamed of yourself for your immaturity and greed.”
He asked the gardener, “Where are the jewels now?”
The gardener, seeing that there was no way out, replied sulkily, “On top of the cupboard in my room.”
Outside, police sirens wailed. John had called the police when Detective Jones was interrogating the gardener. Shaking his head sadly, he instructed the police to bring both the butler and gardener away and at the same time, explained Detective Jones’ theory about the dead body in the river. The police nodded their heads and brought the butler and gardener away for farther interrogation.
Detective Jones packed his bag and prepared to leave.
John ran up to him and thanked him for his help. “Thank you so much. I can’t believe I have recovered my jewels. How can I ever repay you? How much shall I pay you. Any amount, just name the price.”
Detective Jones smiled but declined politely. “My profession is my reward. I will do my best to help you if you have anymore difficulties.” And with that, he tipped his hat at a surprised John and strolled out of the door to his car.


~End of Story~

*Final Part* Mystery Story by Gu Shi Yu

Dear all,

This is part 3, as well as the final part, of Shi Yu's mystery story. Please enjoy it!

~Final Part~
*


Peter was frustrated. He knew there was not enough evidence to go against the murderer. He needed just one more clue…
He walked towards his house. The neighbour was hanging the family’s clothes on the lining. She said “Hi! Looks you wore a new tie today! I’ve never saw you wearing a red tie before.” “Oh, I just bought it yesterday, is it nice?”
“Yeh, fits you.”
“Thank you.”
Stepping inside his house, he remembers the conversation he had with his neighbour. “Neighbour, red tie. Heh! I got it! I should ask William’s neighbour about the murder day!” The idea sprang into his mind. “I’ll do it tonight.” he thought.
Peter went to William’s neighbour’s house. The neighbour let him in and looked as if there is something very important to tell him.
“I’m here because I want to ask about the murder. Have you seen anything unusual?”
“Oh yes of course! I didn’t tell the police that I saw something because I was not very sure about it. It was only after that before I realised it was important. I was preparing breakfast for my kids to go to school. When I was making the milk, I realize the water was too hot and takes a long time to cool down. So, I poured the water out of the window out of convenience. I bent down and saw a man, wearing a bloody shirt at about 6:00am.”
“How tall is he?”
“I think he is at the range of 1.73m to 1.75m. The man was quite tall.”
“Anything else unusual?”
“Nothing else.”
“Thanks. I’ll let you know if I have anymore questions for you.”
“Bye!”
“Bye.”
Peter went home. He was just waiting for dawn to come before he could expose everything and arrest the murder.
*
Peter woke up. Soon, he’ll be able to crack the case. He was full of energy. He got up and called the police officer.
“Hello? This is Peter. Yes, Peter Wallace. I’ve cracked the case. I’ll meet you at the police station.” Peter said.
The two met at the police station. “Bring a few men there. He might resist arrest.” Peter advised. “Alright.”
They arrive at the Charles’s house. Peter knocked on the door. Charles opened the door but dropped his jaw immediately. He was surrounded by policemen. What was he going to do?
“You are under arrest.” the officer announced. Charles’s face turned pale. How regretful he was for killing William.
The police arrested Charles and brought him to the police station. On the way, the police officer asked “How did you manage to crack the case?”
“Simple” Peter said. “When we were at the crime scene, I talked to him. We exchanged handshakes and I realized that his hand was dry and had powder-like particles on it. Since there were no fingerprints at the crime scene, it was quite clear the murderer wore gloves. When you wear gloves, you usually sweat a lot. The murderer might have put some powder to absorb the sweat.
Charles has the key to the house. That explains why there were no sign of force entry. Charles accidentally blurted out he thinks William was put to sleep first before William died. It was true. He mentioned William trusts him a lot, so maybe William said about the jewel from Sydney. Charles lost a lot in stock market recently. James and Jane also suspect him.
I went to the police station, and found out his father was killed in a hit-and-run car accident. The driver was William, but he was only given fine. He might think he should pay his life for his father’s life.
I interviewed the neighbours, and they told me they saw a man wearing a bloody shirt, which I’m very sure it’s the murderer. The man was 1.73m to 1.75m, and was very close to Charles’s height. Simple work!”
“That is why you are the famous detective in town.” The officer smiled.

~End of Story~



*Final Part* Mystery Story by Lee Jia Hern

Dear all,
This is part 3, as well as the final part, of Jia Hern's mystery story. Please enjoy it!
~Final Part~


Chapter 5
Confrontation 
Mr. Zero strode briskly and warmly towards Genesis. That night, he had decided to have a dinner with Genesis in the compounds of Mr. One’s house, in his room. As they were going to start their meal, Mr. Abel barged in and said
“We know your secret. We know that you killed Mrs. One and Apocalypse.”
Clearly lost for words, Mr. Zero and Genesis were shocked. Breaking the silence, Mr. Zero superciliously and mockingly replied
“So what if we did? Yes, we did kill them. Sadly for you, there is no proof to support your claim anyway.” He stated this coldly, precisely and arrogantly.
“Is that really the case? Do you really still think that is still the case? I think you just gave us our proof.”
On that statement, Mr. Abel ran off into the autumn night, with the gelid autumn chill biting into his skin. Even so, Mr. Abel felt warm and victorious in his heart.
Upon reaching home, he drew out a tape recorder from his pocket and could not help but let a triumphant grin appear on his face.
Chapter 6
Revelation
The next day was a cold and windy day. With a triumphant grin on his face, he reached for his coat and left his house. Mr. Abel first went to Mr. One’s home. Allowing him to hear the recording first, they soon left for the police station.
Upon reaching the station, Mr. Abel filed a police report, including a written account from Mr. One, Mr. Abel’s witness, and the recording.
The following day, a group of policemen escorted Genesis and Mr. Zero to the police station. After a successful interrogation, Mr. Abel then explained the deaths of his wife and son to him
“When I had found poison in your son’s body while conducting the autopsy, I became suspicious of attempted murder. I then went to check the scene of the crime. Nothing was different than should be other than an air vent that was opened before. There were no signs of a struggle or a forced entry. I then suspected the people that were inside the building before the crime. I decided to no count the servants as they could not even leave the house, so how could they get poison? They were even scanned for weapons or poisons at home too.
“I observed the people in the house on the night of the murder for a week then. I saw Mr. Zero and Genesis share a bond like a father-child bond. I then became suspicious of a link that may exist between them. When your wife died and after you had told me about the accident, I decided to ask around to know who had introduced the idea to Mrs. One. No one but Genesis knew. She claimed it was Mr. Zero, with a tone that made it sound like a casual statement. I think she did not know the importance of that fact. After that, you told me the link between them of them being father and daughter.”
“That was the key to solving the puzzle. That confirmed the suspicions that I had of a long hidden but strong link between Mr. Zero and Genesis. Genesis did not display any sad emotions after her brother’s, or rather, her stepbrother’s death.”
“She also lived next to Apocalypse. There could possibly be a linked air vent between the two rooms. As the air vent had been opened before, I suspected Genesis had climbed through it and poisoned Apocalypse, then returned to her room. Later, I checked the air vent and found many traces of careless movement inside it. There were also some grains of ricin left inside. Luckily, I had taken precautions to such possible occurrences and had worn a mask.
“Mr. Zero had asked you to adopt Genesis when she was young. I suspect that he had been plotting from then till now, to secure your fortune. The interrogation had confirmed all my suspicions. Mr. Zero and his daughter had killed your wife and son.”
Mr. One was wordless after hearing this. He just left in a daze, looking like he was unable to register what was just said into his mind. As for Mr. Zero and Genesis, Mr. Zero looked as pale as a sheet, Genesis, however, just looked like a repentant person, her face set into a pitiful look.
Mr. Abel could not help but wonder what would happen next…………

~End of Story~

Thursday, September 10, 2009

My Mystery Story *Part 3*

Dear All, please enjoy my mystery story, which will end soon!

Part 3 of Mystery Story:
Title- Revenge Over Relations
Half an hour later, Theodore arrived. Mrs Perry went to show him the way to the valet’s room. Greeting everyone, Theodore made his way towards the valet’s body. He examined the valet’s body and the area around it. Theodore found a bottle of poison in the valet’s right hand. He sprinkled some powder onto the bottle and studied it. Theodore knitted his eyebrows together and thought carefully. “The valet is murdered. Let me explain why before someone asks. There are only the valet’s fingerprints on the bottle, but not on the cap. The murderer probably forced the valet to drink the poison, then wiped the bottle clean and put it into the valet’s hand. Another possibility is that the murderer wore gloves and did the what I just mentioned,” Theodore explained, then opened the valet’s other hand and found a tiny piece of wrinkled paper. Carefully taking it out, he smoothed it and read aloud, “Mistress.” Turning to everyone, Theodore shown the paper to them. “Mistress is written on the paper,” he said, and then turning to Mrs Perry, he asked, “Is this the valet’s handwriting?” Mrs Perry nodded. Theodore replied, “Good. This word must somehow be related to the murderer. Everyone please leave the room, except for Mrs Casper and Christina.”
“Do you both realize that this word is referring to both of you?” Theodore asked carefully. “Now, Mr Theodore, aren’t you jumping to conclusions?” Mrs Casper said angrily. “I am not. I am asking questions to clarify,” the detective answered smoothly and continued, “oh and Mrs Casper can you tell me who is in the room beside Mr Casper, the one, further away from the stairs.” “It belongs to Wilmore’s first wife,” Mrs Casper replied. “You mean that you are not the first wife of Mr Casper? Tell me everything,” Theodore ordered. “I do not know much, only that Mr Casper fell in love with me and abandoned her. It was about twenty- seven years ago. I do not know where she is now, Wilmore does not like to mention her,” Mrs Casper answered thoughtfully.
“Keep the valet’s room protected, I will be back soon,” Theodore shouted as he departed from them and walked towards the stairs.
The detective pushed the door of that room and it open slowly, the hinge had rusted. Theodore stepped into the dusty room and surveyed the scene. There was a four- poster bed, some furniture, a computer, a portrait of the first wife and a door that led to the bathroom. He opened the closet; there was a few clothing left inside. Theodore turned away and focused his attention onto the cupboard. The first shelve had some towels folded neatly together, the second had some letters and the third, a few thick photo albums. Taking a few letters out, Theodore settled himself comfortably onto the armchair nearby. “So her name is Milan Anne Raffles, how would I have like to meet such a interesting woman,” Theodore muttered wistfully. Returning those letters, he retrieved the few thick photo albums. Carefully, he blew the dust off and went through the faded photos. The first album provided no information, nor did the second one. The third one was the newest, the photos was brighter. There were a few photos of the first wife, Mr Casper and a young infant about one- month old. “They had a child, looks like that Milan Anne Raffles went off with the son,” Theodore thought to himself. “Let me find out his name later.” A strong wind blow through the curtains and the pages flipped quickly to the back. One photograph caught Theodore’s eye and he caught the page. It was a picture of the first wife. She was resting her chin on her hand and was wearing a ring. It looked very familiar, but Theodore just cannot remember when did he saw it. It was a golden one with a beautiful, sparkling diamond and some thing engraved on it. Bearing that in mind, Theodore put the photo albums back into the cupboard and moved towards the computer. Theodore pressed a big button and the computer slowly started. After a few minutes of patience, it was finally on. Clicking onto the computer documents, many folders flashed onto the screen. Theodore’s eyes scanned down and happily clicked the folder named ‘photograph’. Then he search for that particular photograph, zooming into the picture, Theodore got a better view of the diamond ring. The initials engraved on it was, WC loves MAR. “Ah, it probably meant, Wilmore Casper loves Milan Anne Raffles,” Theodore reasoned. Switching off the computer, he left the room to use another faster computer.




Surfing the Internet, Theodore went through many useless information about Mr Casper’s business. Finally at a blog, Theodore found some important information.
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I do not believe this, I saw my master’s long- lost child and all that time I did not knew! The child was under a disguise and perfectly fooled me.
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You know too much… You shall suffer.


Posted by- Anonymous


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My master’s biography and his family particulars.


Full name: Wilmore Casper


Born: 27 April 1952


Place Of Birth: Washington D.C, America


Best known as: CEO of Innovation Technology


Father of: Orlando Casper, Christina Gregory Casper


Husband of: Milan Anne Raffles (Past), Lillian Gregory (Present)




Mr Casper’s life was dedicated to his company, Innovation Technology. He is currently living in Houston, America. His son Orlando Casper, was born on 6 February 1981 while Christina Gregory Casper, was born on 29 July 1984.


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You know too much… You shall suffer.


Posted by- Anonymous
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Theodore went through the blog carefully and was surprised that there was no personal information. Who was R Lions? Who threatened him? Is it the killer? Then, with his mind full of questions, Theodore went to find information about Milan Anne Raffles. To his surprise, he came across an article about her death twenty years ago.
Billionaire’s First Wife Dead
Son’s Disappearance Mystifies The World
WILMORE Casper’s wife, Milan Anne Raffles, was found dead in her tiny apartment. Police claims that she died a natural death and are trying to find her son, Orlando Casper, currently twelve years old, who has surprisingly disappeared without trace…
Theodore smiled, it was all clear to him. He closed the computer and hurried to the servant quarters. He went to ask Mrs Perry, followed by the cleaner and the gardener, if they own any blogs and their answer was no. Theodore thoughtfully muttered to himself, “R Lions is probably Ricardo Lyons, the valet. I wonder who was the killer.”
~End of Part 3~

*Part 2* Mystery Story by Zhao Jia Yi

Dear all, enjoy it!

~Part 2~

Title: Combination...
The next morning, Detective Jones arrived at John’s stately mansion where he was welcomed by the multi – millionaire himself. He was escorted into the living room where he had some refreshments before getting to work.
He put on a pair of gloves and retrieved a magnifying glass from his bag. He was directed to the room containing the jewels. He bent down and examined the metal padlock on the door. It was opened. Sure enough, as John had described, there were no signs of forced entry. How could the robber have gotten the keys? Had he stolen them? How did the robber obtain the code? He stole a quick glance at the damaged security camera. It would be of no help to him. Did the person know there was a security camera? Detective Jones was full of questions, however, he knew he would only be able to obtain the answers if he found the robber. He heaved a sigh and stepped into the room.
The room was simply furnished. Nestled in one corner was a table and chair. The only source of light was a ceiling light. The safe was located at the far end of the room. Detective Jones could see the empty space inside the safe. That only made him more determined than ever to recover the stolen jewels and find the culprit.
He carefully dusted the room for fingerprints. His search turned up none. He snorted in frustration. The robber must be either very skilled or clever – he left no clues to the jewels or his identity. For a moment, Detective Jones was clouded with doubt. Could he really solve the case? He shook his head, assuring himself of his ability. After all, he had solved more difficult cases than this one. He would surely be able to uncover this mystery.
He knelt down onto the floor to inspect the safe. All of a sudden, a drop of water landed on his back. Startled, he glanced up. A hole in the ceiling caught his eye. How could he have not noticed it before? What was it there for? Another drop of water landed on his face. The water must be coming out from the hole.
He quickly ran out of the room and climbed up the stairs to the room above. It was the attic. His hand hovered above the brass doorknob. He took a deep breadth and pushed open the door. He could feel it, even in his bones, that he was going discover something important. Detective Jones walked around the attic, taking note of the layer of dust that coated the boxes. After half an hour, he still had no result. Exasperated, he sat down on a box. He gave a start. The box, unlike the others, had no dust surrounding it. It must have been moved recently. What was the reason and who had done it?
He pried open the box and to his surprise, inside the box was a brand new telescope. He was even more amazed when he found a crudely cut hole in the floorboards beside the box. He gingerly lifted the telescope out of the box and positioned it near the hole. He looked through the telescope and was astounded to realize that he was looking at the combination wheel of the metal safe.
Stunned, he rubbed his eyes to make sure he was not hallucinating. He was not. He could clearly see the numbers on the combination wheel. He whistled in surprise. That must be how the thief learnt the code. No fingerprints were found on either the box ore the telescope. Detective Jones was not surprised. He had been investigating the case long enough to know that he was dealing with a very clever and careful person.
Smiling grimly to himself, he left the attic and called John, the gardener and the butler to the living room. He asked the butler and the gardener, “What were both of you doing on the day the jewels were stolen? Sunday, right?”
The butler piped up, “Sir, I was at the post office collecting the letters as usual.”
The gardener stammered, “Uh, um… I… was… busy cleaning the tools in the shed. Some… of them had… um… red stains on them.”
Detectives Jones instructed him, “Fetch me the key to the room containing the jewels.” The gardener quickly hurried away.
John whispered to the Detective Jones, “Who is the robber?”
Detective Jones answered grimly, “It is too early but I have a suspicion.”
The gardener returned, with the key in one hand. After inspecting the key with his magnifying glass, Detective Jones announced,” They are not real, they are fake.” The butler gasped while the gardener stood trembling all over.
Detective Jones turned and stared at the butler, “Why did you steal the jewels? Because I am pretty sure you did it!”
The butler snorted. “How can it be? I will never do such a thing. What is your evidence. Co on, show it. I am telling you, it is not me!”
Detective Jones calmly said, “I suppose you think that post office is opened on a Sunday?”
The butler blushed a deep red but did not back down. “It was just a habit. Natural old habit. You cannot accuse me of anything.”
Detective Jones was not frazzled. “You not only stole the jewels but also killed the maid. You knew that she will be suspected as the robber and wanted to divert suspicion from yourself.”
The butler’s face crumbled but he continued defending himself. “I don’t know what you are talking about. I am telling you, I did not kill her or steal the jewels!” He glared with hatred at Detective Jones.
Detective Jones explained to John and the awe – struck gardener, “You see, he cut a hole in the floorboards of the attic to spy on you when you are opening the safe. He knew that the maid will discover the hole when she is dusting the attic. He wanted to kill her so that she will not mess up his plans. He is constantly ‘disappearing’ to the attic in order to see the code for the safe. You used the garden tools and bashed her skull. That was where the red “paint came from. That was really blood. You were not afraid of your fingerprints on them as you said ‘you were fixing your bike’. No one will suspect you.”
He looked at the butler square in the eye and stated, “In fact, I know that you dumped her body into the Thomson River.”
That was a wild shot in the dark but it had an effect on the butler. He did not say anything but look down at the floor.

~End of Part 2~

*Part 2* Mystery Story by Gu Shi Yu

Dear all,
This is part 2 of Shi Yu's mystery story. Enjoy!

~Part 2~
Lockwood Murder
“Really?”


“Yes. Eh… it’s just my guess.”

“Was there any sign of forced entry when you arrive?”

“No, not really.”

“So who do you think would be the murderer?”

“I think it is Jane. She hates her father for divorcing her mum. Or James. He has a criminal record.”

“For how long were you the doctor of William?”

“Almost about one year. He trusts me a lot. Poor old man. He did not want company at all, not even guards. It was only he had problems with his health that he hired me.”

“Yes, pretty bad he got killed. Oh, and thank you. You’ve been a great help for me.” Peter said. He then went home.



A few days later, Peter Wallace was at the forensic labotory. The results were out. The scientist said, “We found out there were traces of anesthetic in the blood of William Lockwood. The strand of hair belongs to someone called Charles Skylark and the fingerprint belongs to Jane Lockwood and James Lockwood.” “Jane and James……Very high chance they read the will.” Peter thought. “I’ll better question them.”

*

Peter was outside James’s house. He had called Jane to meet there too. He knocked on the door. James opened the door. Peter went in. He questioned them together.

“I’m here to question you about your father’s murder.”

“So what questions do you have for us?”

“I’ll just be direct. You read the will, didn’t you?”

The two looked pale. “How do you know?”

“I found the will in the drawer and evidence show that both of you touched it before.”

“Jane and I love our father. We would not have killed him. No matter how we hate him, he is still our father.” James said suspiciously.


“Really? I don’t think so. Anyway, who do you think is the murderer?

“I think it is Sam. He is quite suspicious. He is too good to be true. Caring so much for an old man. He just doesn’t look like it. We warned our father of him before but he ignored our warning. ” Jane said.

“Do you know what was in the safe?”

“There was the jewel from Sydney. My father bought it a few years ago in an auction. It was worth millions.”

“Thank you. I’ll let you know if I have anymore questions for you.”

*

Peter went home. He sat on his chair and thought.

Peter first met Sam just after the murder. He had an unusually dry hand, and was quite tall. He mentioned the way William was killed and it turned out to be true. Somehow, the two siblings suspects him.

Next, was this person called Charles. Who Charles? Why was his hair found in the bedroom? Why had his name appeared in this mystery in the first place? It was possible Charles used a fake name, but why must he use it?

Jane saw the will. She said she would not kill him as he is her father. But that sounds unconvincing. Jane hated her father for divorcing her dearest mum, according to Sam. Was it possible for her to kill William?

Now comes James. He, too, saw the will. He has a criminal record of stealing, which was a very possible suspect of the murderer. Could he be the one?

Peter thinks that he should now find out who is Charles.

*

Peter went to the police station. It is always full of records. He went to the computer and searched ‘Charles Skylark’. There were many results. But there was one which caught his eye.

The title was ‘Shawn Skylark’. It was a police report dated in the 1990s. The description says he is the father of Charles Skylark, who died in a hit-and-run car accident. The police found the driver, which is William Lockwood, but only gave him a fine and nothing else. They said to go to Shelf 8, Row B to find out more about this.

So, Peter searched for the file. When he finally found it, he took the file out. Opening the file, he found a copy of a doctorate. It was dated three years ago. This person named Charles had worked as a surgeon for two years and switched to be a personal doctor of William Lockwood. “Sam…”Peter murmured, but continued to look through the file.

He found out Charles bought a stock market after he quitted his hospital job. It fell very badly recently.

Peter called Sam. He asked Sam “Who are you exactly?”

“I’m Sam.”

“Sam what?”

“Em…Sam Skylark.”

“Your name is Charles Skylark, right?”

“That… that was my old name.” Sam lied.

“You’re lying!”

“Alright, my name is Charles.” Charles sounded frightened.

“Anything else?”

“Nothing.” With that Peter hung up.

~End of Part Two~

*Part 2* Mystery Story by Lee Jia Hern

Enjoy Jia Hern's Part 2 mystery story!

~Part 2~
He performed an autopsy on Apocalypse, and finds that there was excess fluid in his lungs. His respiratory and cardiopulmonary systems had also failed. He then finds, at the end of the autopsy, an abnormal substance in Apocalypse’s lungs.




After the autopsy was finished, Mr. Abel had collected a sample of the substance for lab tests. He went to the laboratory, and then tested the substance. Within a few hours, he had gotten the results. Mr. Abel was shocked to find what the substance really was. It was actually ricin, which is rated as one of the most deadly poison that exists. The ricin found led him to believe that Apocalypse had been murdered by inhaling ricin. Shocked and surprised, he returns home after work to a night of unrest, tormented by multitudes of questions pounding in is head.



As he walked home in the autumn chill, he thought “What does this finding signify? What will happen next?” He was burdened with many thoughts that night.


Chapter 3
Plans


As the leaves rustled in the autumn wind the next day, Mr. Abel set out for Mr. One’s house. When he reached, he claimed to be an official here to inspect the crime scene. Being fluent with forensic arts, he quickly combed the room for telltale traces of a struggle. There were none. The windows were shut tightly, with cobwebs where the lock was. The door was not tampered with, and there was no sign of any blood. Surprisingly, the air vent in his room had been opened before. He later travels to the nearby police station, checking if the crime scene had been cleaned. The answer was negative. As there was no blood at the scene of the crime, nor any observable sabotage at the entrances, Mr. Abel concludes that the murderer had been inside the building before the crime.



The only people that were in the building on the night of Apocalypse’s death were Genesis, Apocalypse, Mr. Zero, Mr. and Mrs. One and the servants. The servants lived two floors below where the One family lived. The person whose room was nearest to Apocalypse’s room was Genesis, who lived just a room next to Apocalypse. Thinking back on the autopsy, Mr. Abel remembers the source of ricin-Castor beans. He continues to wonder who killed Apocalypse.



He drops the servants as suspects and there was no way they could get poison into the compounds without being caught and anyway they never went to the market- Mr. One considered them untrustworthy and always asked Mrs. One to buy the food herself. Being paranoid, whenever the servants need to come into any contact with the family or their living quarters – such as cooking, cleaning the rooms which they inhabit etc – they are scanned for any traced of items that could kill such as poisons or weapons. He decides to observe them over the course of a week.



Chapter 4

Results



The result of ascertainment was clear. Mr. and Mrs. One were visibly shocked and anxious. During Apocalypse’s funeral, Mrs. One wept so much that her eyes swelled. Mrs. One, for some reason did not leave the house after Apocalypse’s funeral. Genesis, for some unapparent reason, did not take the death hard and continued to do her daily activities, and if it was possible, Mr. Abel found that she seemed a little happier, somehow. Mr. Zero just kept an inscrutable face, seemingly devoid of emotions. The only thing confusing about the observation was this - Mr. Zero seemed to treat Genesis more kindly and tenderly than anyone else. The way he treated Genesis was even somewhat like a father-daughter relationship. Mr. Abel wonders if there is a link between Genesis and Mr. Zero.



Soon after Apocalypse’s funeral, Mrs. One went for plastic surgery to return her eyes back to normal. She mentioned that someone introduced the idea to her. It was not to be. The surgery was a failure due to an electrical failure that short-circuited the machines left Mrs. One permanently scarred. No one knew about the surgery except Mrs. One, Mr. One, the plastic surgeon, the person who had introduced the idea of plastic surgery to Mrs. One and anyone the person had told.



Mrs. One committed suicide quickly. It was not given much attention, as Mrs. One could probably have killed herself over grief at her son’s death. She burned charcoal in her room and locked the doors and windows, then let the carbon dioxide fumes asphyxiate her.



Mr. One was devastated at the loss of his son and his wife in the same period of time. He was more emotionally fragile than ever, sometimes missing meals and locking himself in his bedroom.



Mr. Abel decided to go to her inhumation to see if he can find any clues to the death of Apocalypse. Surprisingly, he saw a scar that he had never seen before on Mrs. One’s face.



He asks Mr. One where his wife had got the scar. With a tear-stained face and a soft voice, he slowly relates the accident to Mr. Abel.



Upon learning that someone else had introduced the idea to her, Mr. Abel became suspicious. He attempted to ask around to find out who had introduced the idea to her. His hopes fell, as no one seemed to know who had done it. Fortuitously, one person knew— Genesis. She said that Mr. Zero had done it, without any particular emotion. The way she said it made it sound like a casual statement. Mr. Abel starts to think that the possibility of a relationship between Mr. Zero and Genesis has increased.



He wonders if he should ask if there is anyone who knows of a relationship between them. The next day, he begins by asking Mr. One, who just said with a faltering voice “That is none of your business”. Mr. Abel continued to pressure him for information. Already being heavily emotionally stressed, he gives in, saying this



“In the past, Mr. Zero had used to have a daughter. Mr. Zero had been financially so stressed, he had no money to even feed himself and so, he decided to come to me, asking me to adopt her. Pitying him, I adopted her. He also wanted to keep this a secret, as he felt that he would be greatly humiliated if others were to find out. I agreed, and so, until now, no one but you, me, Mr. Zero and possibly Genesis knows this.”


Shocked by this revelation, everything clicked into place now for Mr. Abel.

~End of Part 2~

Combination (Mystery Story) by Zhao Jiayi

Dear all,
Another mystery story for you to read. Jiayi is from 5K if you don't know her well. Her mystery story is really interesting and hers was one of the best in class. She is entering both competitions.
~Part 1~
Title: Combination...
The man cautiously stole a quick glance at his surroundings. Spotting the blinking red light of the security camera nestled in a corner, he grinned, knowing he was prepared for it. He took out a pebble from his pocket and threw it with all his might at the security camera. With a resounding crash, the camera broke into fragments. Glass was strewed all over the carpeted floor. All that was left of the security camera was a few wires dangling in the air. He quickly pocketed the pebble, lest anyone find it and discover his fingerprints. Quietly, he inserted the metal key into the keyhole, and with a twist of the doorknob, he pushed open the heavy metal door and stepped into the room. After closing the door, the man waited, listening for the sound of footsteps. There were none. He heaved a sigh of relief and silently thanked the soundproof doors.
He crept over to the safe at the far end of the room and gingerly turned the combination wheel. With a click, the heavy padlock on the safe opened. Once again, he halted, straining his ears at the slightest noise. After a few minutes, convinced that no one heard the metallic click of the safe opening, he swung open the metal door of the safe and laughed in triumph. Two billion worth of jewels would be his. All those weeks of meticulous planning had paid off. He slid the jewels into the bag. Where could he hide them later? In a closet? That would be too risky. What about hiding them in a blanket and sewing it up. He considered the idea and agreed on it.
He carefully wiped his fingerprints off the safe and closed it. He would have to get rid of the body of the maid later. Heaving the bag over his shoulder, he headed towards a room at the far end of the corridor, with the jewels…
Detective Jones lowered himself into a red plush chair. He glanced at the evening newspaper lying on the table beside him. He was captivated by the headlines written in bold on the first page. It read, “Female Body Found in Thomson River!” He quickly scanned the page, skipping over the irrelevant words. It seemed that a middle – aged woman had drowned in the river. She had been dead for more than five hours when a farmer found her. Till now, she had not been identified. The police was still investigating her case, unconvinced that she had committed suicide.
Detective Jones was deep in thought when the shrill ringing of the doorbell broke his reverie. Startled, he opened the door to find a man on his doorstep. Without waiting for an invitation, the man strode into the living room and sank into an armchair. Detective Jones sat down too, all the time, silently observing his visitor under the light. Perched precariously on the man’s upturned nose was a stiff moustache while his lips were set in a grim line. Although the man behaved arrogantly, the look of anxiety on his face betrayed his earlier confidence.
Detective Jones spoke up, “Sir, is there anything I can do to help you?”
The man rose and began pacing back and forth, muttering to himself. He turned around and faced Detective Jones, declaring, “I am John Burskov, the multi – millionaire who owns the Windower Estate, you may have heard of me?”
Without waiting for a reply, he continued, “Well, my good man, I have been told you are able to solve many difficult crimes and thus, came to you with a most difficult case.”
Detective Jones replied, “I will do my best, sir.”
“You see, my hobby is collecting precious jewels from all around the world. You realize that they are the target of many greedy people. In order to keep them safe, I have a room built specially for me to keep the jewels in. And even so, I dare not risk losing them, hence I hid them in a metal safe. The safe, to be opened, required the correct code to be turned on the combination wheel.” John paused, glancing around the living room to make sure no one was listening.
“The room,” he elaborated, “Has an unbreakable metal door which requires a key to be opened.”
Detective Jones cut in, ‘And where do you keep the key?”
John blinked in surprise at the question. “Funny you should ask, but I entrusted them to my gardener while I was out of town for the past few days. I only returned today from my business trip and discovered someone stole my jewels.” He gave a bellow of rage.
Detective Jones cocked his head to one side before replying, “Do proceed.”
“I also had a security camera planted outside the room. I was sure that no one would be able to steal the jewels but someone did. The security camera was smashed, with what, goodness’ know!”
Detectives Jones interrupted, “Didn’t you hear it?”
John Burskov shook his head. “Oh no! The room had soundproof doors. It also has no windows. The door is the only way in.”
Detective Jones considered it carefully.
John Burskov carried on, “ Somehow, whoever he or she is managed to get my keys and cracked the code. He stole every single jewel, every single jewel! They cost me a mint of money. Insurance cannot cover up all the expenses!” Detective Jones tried to soothe the agitated multi – millionaire down.
John refused to be calmed. “How can I get them back? They are extremely rare, one – of – a – kind! I cannot replace them! I …”
Detective Jones asked, “Will you kindly tell me, sir, who is living with you currently?”
John waved his hand carelessly and answered, “Oh, I lived with my butler, gardener and a maid.”
Detective Jones asked, “Has any strange things happened lately?”
“Recently, my butler is constantly disappearing to goodness’ know where. He say he is fixing his bike. The strangest thing is, my maid disappeared at the same time my jewels went missing.” John responded.
He whipped around, “Do you suppose the robber is her?”
Detective Jones said, “Let’s not jump to conclusion. For all we know, it might just be a coincidence. However, in order to solve the case, I will have to visit your house. Will that suit you?”
The multi – millionaire nodded. “How about tomorrow?”
Detective Jones agreed and saw John Burskov out of the door before retiring to bed, with visions of missing jewels swimming around his head.
~End of Part 1~